Aarzoo..
Sapnon ke aakash tale, kalpana ki hawaon se door
Palkon ke saaye tale, nazar ki parchaiyon se door..
Ehsaas ke kadmon tale, aahaton ki dhakan se door
Aawazon ke daayre tale, raat ki arzoo se door..
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..
girti baarish ki boondon tale, badalon ki chadar se door
behti hawaon ki narmiyon tale, jagti huyi kamna se door..
jaagte huye armanon ke tale, soti huyi jannat se door
saath nibhane ki chaah tale, har subha ki arzoo se door.
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..
Bhawna ki bheeni khushbu tale, umang ki us raah se door
Jeewan ki mannaton tale, dooriyon ki deewaron se door
Chahaton ki muskaan ke tale, sundar se us ghar se door
Khushi ke har sagar tale, khamoshi ki arzoo se door..
Jise dhhondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..
Thamti saason ke tale, geeli un neegahon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain , kya wahi ho tum..
Jeene ki sabhi aashaon tale, muskurahat ki kiran se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..
Komal chandni ke tale, nisha ki mand mehek se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum..
Arzoo ki is chaah tale, Arzoo ki in sabhi arzuon se door
Jise dhoondti hai neegahain, kya wahi ho tum…
Akanksha ..
Ps: This is my first attempt to write something in hindi.
I know I suck at it, nevertheless.. I tried..to give word to my feelings..

5 comments:
Haan Akanksha, wahi hoon main. I am the ONE - Neo :D
You know what, it's a beautiful. beautiful poem. As is generally the case with parallel sentences, it's difficult to hold on to a pattern with coherence of meaning, and you've attempted that brilliantly. Bravo!!
I simply love the following lines:
Palkon ke saaye tale
Ehsaas ke kadmon tale, aahaton ki dhakan se door
girti baarish ki boondon tale
saath nibhane ki chaah tale, har subha ki arzoo se door
Chahaton ki muskaan ke tale
Thamti saason ke tale, geeli un neegahon se door
Komal chandni ke tale, nisha ki mand mehek se door
And you don't suck at it. You get that? You better do!
It's a very good attempt, just write more of it. Don't deprive us mortals of your beautiful thoughts. PLEASE. :)
loved it.. ur amazing with hindi as well.. bravo
deepak, thanks so much.. i love this combination of urdu n hindi a lot..
translate??
Nu post!!!
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