Cute/Crazy/Beautiful
The zephyr of the moment eddies
up till the expectations..
burgeons it thus admist
some new way, a coincidence..
sub-rosa,
an association at first glance
is assured by the calm delight
of your sweet alacrity..
As words were exchanged
the first day of college
your steps of friendship
silently marked the space
grounded our unusual bonding
segued on thus through
that pleasant moment..
my association..
has been held by us silently
strong still..
as the first day passed
the soul of friendship
named you Cute..
The water of hope swirled down
reaching the sea of new care
drops of affection and promise
emerges afresh with time..
drops like rain, often have mirth
testing times my friend thus
proves their worth..
Only a few gets grounded
Only a few are bonded
drops of truth don't always
have to fall..
They rise through the eyes
ever so thoughtful..
I saw you,
Jovial, blithe, considerate..
you always appeared..
hidden somewhere in you
was a radical mien..
reflective of sadness in known
realities of the other dry drops..
serene essence of the showered sand
captured me, spreading, throughout
essenced you as Beautiful..
The sky of the passing times blinked
showed me a white fluffy cloud
a cloud of exuberance with sun's warmth,
it was a cute-crazy kid..
romping among the big clouds of self
trusted it many a times in hope alone
the promising clouds of rain..
but thought it still that
"Rain ultimately falls"
soon it realized the fake, the better..
I saw it all, I noticed..
realization brought the previous lonely
drop back to you..
assured that drop in silence of night
to retain the wetness of its care forever..
het up, exultant, you embraced
my silence..
the kid, so sweet in you
makes me feel like home among
the strangers..time to time..
accepting one's silent understanding
than regular words..
is no easy task my mate..
you nurtured my care with a smile..
the softness of emotions of an individual
in you, of that sweet aiming high kid in you..
made me call you ..Cute..Crazy..Beautiful..
SKY remains forever..
and so shall my silent care and blessing..
Akanksha..
4 comments:
Phew!!! another one and another B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. one...
"The zephyr of the moment eddies"
"the soul of friendship named you Cute.."
"drops of truth don't always
have to fall..
They rise through the eyes
ever so thoughtful.."
"Rain ultimately falls"
Couldn't post the whole poem over here so will have to make do with these lines... You know, again it's typically Akanksha[:P], not bcoz it's complex but because you, so effortlessly, weave in and out of the theme, bringing in adjectives that so fit the description... and associate one thing with the other... I cannot explain it to you... and yes, you do make your readers work hard :D
Hey, you blogrolled me... noticed it today... how long has it been there... and I love Swet(blushing) ;) ... no one's called me anything but Swetank till now.. thank you for the wishes... I'd have to make them count now... good you are almost over with your exams... do well in the last one...
Achha, you said that your earlier poem, "Oh Boy, This Love Has To Be You".. you didn't post the complete poem on the blog... could you send it to me, the whole thing....plzzz
okay, tata...this is becoming bigger than a post...though I get the honors for the opening comment :)... take care
Ah! forgot to mention...
"SKY remains forever.." is too good and the title.. well, that is another thing that I really liked abt this poem... and as always, the way you sign off with Akanksha... damn, i'm bad with words... can't seem to be able to convey anything... anyways, waiting for the next one already (there's no end to greed, right?)
Swet
Read it three times over and cannot stop... am addicted.... will read it once more before I drop off to sleep... guess will have a few dreams tonight... cute crazy and beautiful... and will try not to spam your whatever they call this...comment window, I think...
Swet
Hey, I book tagged you. See my blog and you'll know.
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